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Mr Jones of the Manor Farm.  The hen-houses locked for night. Jones, too drunk to shut the pop-holes. His lantern, with the ring of light. Dancing from side to side. Lurched across the yard. Kicked off his boots. Drew himself a last glass of beer. Then made his way up to bed. Where Mrs Jones was already snoring. 

Short Sentences: Home free

Sighing with relief. I let go of all the tension that I just witnessed. I have achieved. Finally escaped. Everything is in the past.  Finished. The feeling of freedom. I have made it. 

Sighing with relief. I let go of all the tension that I just witnessed. I have achieved. Finally escaped. Everything is in the past.  Finished. The feeling of freedom. I have made it. This all started when; continuous suspicious crunching footsteps, creeping closer. I looked behind me and  I was sprinting away before you could even say a word. 


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